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It was a little wierd, and it just seemed like the toys were playing with eachother, which resulted in making the kid go crazy, lol. I don't know, I'm not a big fan of these types of animations, but it was well done and thought out. I especially liked the graphics used. Great job!

-the SardonicSamurai

Author's Response:

Lol yeah your right... It did seem like the toys where playing with each other but really they tied up the kid and had evil plans... actually theres alot to the story but i ended up cutting alot out when i realized how long it would be and i know peoples attention span is like at max 2 or 3 minutes.. lol anyways Thanks soooo much for the review!!!! wow 9!!! Thanks!!!! I know i still need work and I need to add some more plot and story to it... but I will soon be making a nother flash and will be sure to take all the advice i can to improve and improve and more improvements! and i could use any incuragement from you guys... I have a hard time thinking up stories but when i do... Look out i know I will improve... Expecially when i go to college... I will be going for graphic design and maybe some animation... Creative thoughts will flow... lol anyways im just rambling and wasting time. Anyways all in all THANK You so much for the Great rating!! And your kind words!!

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Score: 3

"not so good..."

submission: Halo and Hawking

date: June 8, 2006

Hate to break it to you, but that's not a new type of animating style... Maybe to you, if that's what you mean... but far from new... The graphics weren't really good, the sound quality was horrible, and the sound of a little kid doing the master chief is horrible... I assume you did all of the voices... If you can't voice act, I highly recommend finding voice actors if you plan on doing another one. Also... "you look like cheese!"... yellow paint... "look! A monkey!"... Some people aren't born to be funny... sorry... Better luck next time?

Take this post as acceptive criticism. People just saying "good job" doesn't lead to any improvement.

Author's Response:

Yeah, I meant new for me.
I looked for voice actors, nobody wanted to do it... meh.

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Score: 10

"Great SB"

submission: Ultimate Peter Griffin SB

date: June 8, 2006

I've listened to a lot of sound boards, but this was a really good one. Obviously, you couldn't fit every single funny quote Peter Griffin has said (so many!) but the SB is just awesome.

The graphics are good! It isn't just some ugly background with crappy designed buttons. No, it was designed well, and very well organized. Good job on the SB. This is probably the best SB I've seen.

Author's Response:

Yes I watched every single episode from all 4 seasons and pretty much recorded everything I could use, a big part of them couldn't fit in so I took out the best ones, thanks for the review :)

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Score: 10

"Once again, good job"

submission: StarCraft: The Return

date: June 6, 2006

Good job once again! I still have the same complaint as last time, and that is the voice syncing. But, you did a lot better then you did the last time. I liked how you kept the helmets shut for most of the time to avoid the syncing too (a lot of people recommended that with your first episode)

Another problem I sensed was some of the action scenes. There was a lot of "not real smooth" screen transitions. It seemed like you cut back and forth between different shots. Other then these minor things, you did great.

Since I'm a fan of SC, and that I think you're doing a wonderful job so far with this movie, I say an overall 10. Keep up the good work ^^.

Author's Response:

The syncing is much better than the previous episode - hopefully you cut to the action scenes again when watching them, because it's as simple as that to sync that up again, and out of sync it's just arse to watch since everything happens quickly. You could remedy this by lowering the quality, or buying a better computer. ;)
I hear you on the action scenes - I doubt anyone's noticing but this is an entire megabyte smaller than the previous episode and just as long, with more detail - I managed this by using many of the same objects repeatedly and only using 3d for visually interesting bits etc. The next one I think I'll throw a bit more in there, so you'll hopefully see the action is a bit more fluid. Thanks for the review!

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Score: 8

"Pretty good"

submission: Kronos, The Last Titan

date: June 3, 2006

Not a whole lot of animating, but you did a good job putting everything together. There's a quick question I'd like to ask though. How did you do the smoke effects in the begginning? (or I guess the fog, or whatever)

Author's Response:

i used rendered clouds from a photoshop filter, and when applyed in flash i set the alpha to a low percentage.

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Score: 8

"Pretty Good"

submission: StarCraft: Reconnoiter

date: May 9, 2006

I like the overall story, and the fight scenes were pretty good, especially when you used some of the 3D models.

However, I wasn't a big fan of the overall design of the characters. For instance, it probably would've been better to keep down their visors. It was a little annoying to see the mouths randomly moving to their voices. Other than that, good job. Long live SC ^^.

Author's Response:

I'm going to sync the lips to the voice in the next one, I see this as the biggest fault people're finding in this submission, thanks!

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